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Occupational safety ought to be valued. If we neglected its importance, there will be consequences we may not be able to recover. To learn how to (minimize and even avoid occupational unsafety)/(strengthen occupational safety) is a critical step being successful. I am delighted to share with you by the above. Thanks for your patience/time/listening.
您的4與前句不通,職業安全為什麼要"避免",邀避免的是"職業不安全",我已經修正如上
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